Comments for Carveresque http://carveresque.wordpress.com writing group Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:55:47 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on anyone there? by jooleeyet http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/09/17/anyone-there/#comment-16 jooleeyet Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:55:47 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/09/17/anyone-there/#comment-16 it was a great idea! shame that people aren't using it - what can you do?! the group is looking like it'll remain small too - but that's probably a good thing as people then have more time for feedback and learning from each other. onwards and upwards! it was a great idea! shame that people aren’t using it – what can you do?! the group is looking like it’ll remain small too – but that’s probably a good thing as people then have more time for feedback and learning from each other.
onwards and upwards!

]]> Comment on anyone there? by David Holmes http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/09/17/anyone-there/#comment-15 David Holmes Tue, 29 Sep 2009 10:44:15 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/09/17/anyone-there/#comment-15 Not all that often by the looks of it... oh well, it was a good idea. Not all that often by the looks of it… oh well, it was a good idea.

]]> Comment on O by David Holmes http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/o/#comment-14 David Holmes Wed, 05 Aug 2009 14:32:31 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=43#comment-14 A very interesting structure, as usual! You had me guessing up to the end, but it all made sense when I re-read it. A very interesting structure, as usual! You had me guessing up to the end, but it all made sense when I re-read it.

]]> Comment on Southwark Solstice by David Holmes http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/08/southwark-solstice/#comment-13 David Holmes Tue, 04 Aug 2009 14:27:13 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/08/southwark-solstice/#comment-13 It's like a bad dream, and I DO feel scared reading it. The language is very evocative, particularly phrases such as "all that she can do is mouth mute warnings". It’s like a bad dream, and I DO feel scared reading it. The language is very evocative, particularly phrases such as “all that she can do is mouth mute warnings”.

]]> Comment on That Winters Evening by David Holmes http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/22/that-winters-evening/#comment-12 David Holmes Tue, 04 Aug 2009 14:22:53 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=73#comment-12 It's authentically scary, and you build up the tension very well to the end. It’s authentically scary, and you build up the tension very well to the end.

]]> Comment on That Winters Evening by oneikehc http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/22/that-winters-evening/#comment-11 oneikehc Mon, 03 Aug 2009 13:34:33 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=73#comment-11 Yes this story was it written in response to the family photo exercise. Yes this story was it written in response to the family photo exercise.

]]> Comment on That Winters Evening by oneikehc http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/22/that-winters-evening/#comment-10 oneikehc Mon, 03 Aug 2009 13:32:57 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=73#comment-10 Hi Jacks Thanks you for your comment's, I am glad you enjoyed the story. Yes I would say 85% of the story is true apart from the end. My sister didn't get kidnapped and were not twins. I received really good feeback from Zoë reading this story also, which I will put up soon. I hope to read some of your work soon too. Hi Jacks

Thanks you for your comment’s, I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Yes I would say 85% of the story is true apart from the end.
My sister didn’t get kidnapped and were not twins.
I received really good feeback from Zoë reading this story also, which I will put up soon.
I hope to read some of your work soon too.

]]> Comment on That Winters Evening by jaks65 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/07/22/that-winters-evening/#comment-9 jaks65 Wed, 29 Jul 2009 14:44:27 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=73#comment-9 Oneikeh, this gave me a real chill. Was it written in response to the family photo exercise? Is it a true story??? You got the suspense just right - I couldn't wait to get to the end! Excellent! Oneikeh, this gave me a real chill. Was it written in response to the family photo exercise? Is it a true story??? You got the suspense just right – I couldn’t wait to get to the end! Excellent!

]]> Comment on Nail Polish by David Holmes http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/06/25/nail-polish/#comment-5 David Holmes Thu, 02 Jul 2009 15:17:04 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-5 Thanks very much! You're right, though, Pear Drops would have been a better title. Thanks very much! You’re right, though, Pear Drops would have been a better title.

]]> Comment on Nail Polish by jaks65 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/2009/06/25/nail-polish/#comment-4 jaks65 Wed, 01 Jul 2009 10:49:52 +0000 http://carveresque.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-4 I really liked this David - at one point I wanted to rename it pear drops! But it made me smile at the end and your really brought this short scene to life...excellent! I really liked this David – at one point I wanted to rename it pear drops! But it made me smile at the end and your really brought this short scene to life…excellent!

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